tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post1180916199006400241..comments2023-04-15T16:07:55.981+00:00Comments on Shapeshifting Green: Crafty Green Poethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-76233196639828007092008-09-29T13:46:00.000+00:002008-09-29T13:46:00.000+00:00Thanks Angelika - I hoped you would correct me, my...Thanks Angelika - I hoped you would correct me, my German grammar isn't very good sometimes....Crafty Green Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-67075662530032829612008-09-29T13:30:00.000+00:002008-09-29T13:30:00.000+00:00I like this haiku, Juliet!may I offer a bit help f...I like this haiku, Juliet!<BR/><BR/>may I offer a bit help for the German version?... <BR/><BR/>for line 2 I suggest:<BR/><BR/>ein frisch gebackenes<BR/><BR/><BR/>best wishes,<BR/>Angelikahaiku-shelf (Angelika Wienert)https://www.blogger.com/profile/01004167617562345120noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-90084243112711105152008-09-20T11:02:00.000+00:002008-09-20T11:02:00.000+00:00This one made me laugh, Juliet. I have a German co...This one made me laugh, Juliet. I have a German cookbook, and lots of recipes call for a white bread roll. I have never seen anything like that.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-67736008776858410662008-09-19T07:38:00.000+00:002008-09-19T07:38:00.000+00:00What nathan said. My German is too unGerman. The E...What nathan said. My German is too unGerman. The English hits the spot, though.Rethabilehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03523368313680103826noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-67305199716908768262008-09-18T22:48:00.000+00:002008-09-18T22:48:00.000+00:00Nice comparative juxtapostion, Juliet.the crunchof...Nice comparative juxtapostion, Juliet.<BR/><BR/>the crunch<BR/>of a taco shell...<BR/>crescent moonjoshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06273213793798540656noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-18979797243041807282008-09-16T16:21:00.000+00:002008-09-16T16:21:00.000+00:00I can only comment on the English but I think it's...I can only comment on the English but I think it's a great haiku.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com