tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post1785713574220659064..comments2023-04-15T16:07:55.981+00:00Comments on Shapeshifting Green: UnspokenCrafty Green Poethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comBlogger32125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-90184573692258340712007-06-09T04:35:00.000+00:002007-06-09T04:35:00.000+00:00Love this and want to jump in and tell them to spe...Love this and want to jump in and tell them to speak the next time. This breaks my heart.Marcia (MeeAugraphie)https://www.blogger.com/profile/00656288704821106002noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-42998549590223649292007-05-31T15:25:00.000+00:002007-05-31T15:25:00.000+00:00I am thinking she is only going to think it is swe...I am thinking she is only going to think it is sweet for a short time period; then she is going to get creeped out because it has been a year and half; then mad - change the number; he calls again. ok it is two years now; long past the time for a restraining order. <BR/><BR/>fun to read it and the comments about it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-23736463156521874632007-05-30T09:53:00.000+00:002007-05-30T09:53:00.000+00:00Hi, I followed you from ClockworkChris. I loved th...Hi, I followed you from ClockworkChris. I loved this poem, it's so touching<BR/>Thank you for sharing<BR/><BR/>JoyJoyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02820873328772869629noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-17514461417940509552007-05-28T03:05:00.000+00:002007-05-28T03:05:00.000+00:00I wholeheartedly agree with the comments above, es...I wholeheartedly agree with the comments above, especially those of Pauline and Jim. (There's not much else I could add; we readers of this piece seem to be riding the same boat. ^_^)<BR/><BR/>Feels great to be back here after several months. I've been checking out past poems here (and, later, on your other blog); I've much enjoyed reading "Coming of Age."<BR/><BR/>Cheers.S.L. Corsuahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10299376651709536034noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-6111583296617873842007-05-25T16:03:00.000+00:002007-05-25T16:03:00.000+00:00Wow, seems like I've have been in that situation b...Wow, seems like I've have been in that situation before. Very personal poem, short and powerful.Nonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17780195188813239591noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-90603212133187245242007-05-25T14:02:00.000+00:002007-05-25T14:02:00.000+00:00I hate coming late to the party. What can I do but...I hate coming late to the party. What can I do but repeat what has already been said...loved this, poignant, powerful, paper-cut sharp. Wonderful!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-53024408490716254472007-05-25T12:21:00.000+00:002007-05-25T12:21:00.000+00:00Me, too! Love the brevity, intensifies the punch.Me, too! Love the brevity, intensifies the punch.Debhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14744896385434246402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-66029601809315660162007-05-25T02:06:00.000+00:002007-05-25T02:06:00.000+00:00I absolutely love this one. It's perfect. I think ...I absolutely love this one. It's perfect. I think it's interesting that they're connecting in an odd sort of way.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-14177659721828502562007-05-25T00:05:00.000+00:002007-05-25T00:05:00.000+00:00Juliet,This is so real it feels like a cut. Very w...Juliet,<BR/>This is so real it feels like a cut. Very well done.<BR/>relrelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09030572981830789370noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-30221408035301998022007-05-24T22:27:00.000+00:002007-05-24T22:27:00.000+00:00A truly powerful piece. It's perfect.A truly powerful piece. It's perfect.Beamanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10516397458228874124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-13700115344811381732007-05-24T19:29:00.000+00:002007-05-24T19:29:00.000+00:00Something about this took me aback a little. I di...Something about this took me aback a little. I didn't expect it to be so effective. Very nice.SquareTravelerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04744444321242833934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-8650129385675512212007-05-24T19:02:00.000+00:002007-05-24T19:02:00.000+00:00A universal theme of longing and restrait. Very we...A universal theme of longing and restrait. Very well done.wendyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14586814769281622578noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-758080798519705652007-05-24T18:48:00.000+00:002007-05-24T18:48:00.000+00:00You have a way of disturbing us with your poems, i...You have a way of disturbing us with your poems, in a good way.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13054205963916941320noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-64519702798218887592007-05-24T18:06:00.000+00:002007-05-24T18:06:00.000+00:00Really, really good! I'm rooting for them to get t...Really, really good! I'm rooting for them to get to talk someday!!Clarehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11746014771712020963noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-66026637571634983272007-05-24T16:42:00.000+00:002007-05-24T16:42:00.000+00:00I like this.I like this.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-75653048226432966482007-05-24T15:53:00.000+00:002007-05-24T15:53:00.000+00:00That would break my heart! Well done!That would break my heart! Well done!Tammy Brierlyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14673290512175050093noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-86988570828475085292007-05-24T15:39:00.000+00:002007-05-24T15:39:00.000+00:00very poignant and touching piece. Thanks for shar...very poignant and touching piece. Thanks for sharing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-39537922272611291652007-05-24T15:35:00.000+00:002007-05-24T15:35:00.000+00:00Great dialogue, nondialogue. Way intelligent abou...Great dialogue, nondialogue. Way intelligent about the way we behave, or misbehave.Jim Brockhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14408507847342833145noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-76601522143761238202007-05-24T15:22:00.000+00:002007-05-24T15:22:00.000+00:00Oh my...that literally brought back some memories ...Oh my...that literally brought back some memories for me. I can just FEEL the pain dripping from your words. Truly a wonderful poem...full of emotion.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-3853629987962063562007-05-24T14:33:00.000+00:002007-05-24T14:33:00.000+00:00You must know my ex-boyfriend, right? This poem is...You must know my ex-boyfriend, right? This poem is so spare, so economic in its use of words--and yet the beauty of it is that everything necessary to capture that pathos perfectly is articulated. I loved it.chicklegirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03000215636803243874noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-62837791064522075152007-05-24T13:48:00.000+00:002007-05-24T13:48:00.000+00:00An effective piece--it got me emotionally involved...An effective piece--it got me emotionally involved in the live of the two characters. And in under 100 words. Well done.Lisa Cohenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07530826748768737972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-21941513941552531892007-05-24T12:53:00.000+00:002007-05-24T12:53:00.000+00:00As others have said, I can only repeat. This was s...As others have said, I can only repeat. This was so well done and I loved the simplicity of it...Reginahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14287107184977896696noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-52657860667488144342007-05-24T12:15:00.000+00:002007-05-24T12:15:00.000+00:00Sometimes the words that are left unsaid are the m...Sometimes the words that are left unsaid are the most powerful of all.<BR/><BR/>Well done.Beccahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14623887166087444590noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-82403943143272395372007-05-24T11:44:00.000+00:002007-05-24T11:44:00.000+00:00This is pretty authentic and a nice portrait of th...This is pretty authentic and a nice portrait of the situation.Jessicahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09701158085304753313noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-62531506162801409922007-05-24T11:40:00.000+00:002007-05-24T11:40:00.000+00:00Oh, the heartbreak! Such a familiar story for so m...Oh, the heartbreak! Such a familiar story for so many. Well done.paris parfaithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05457437124988976587noreply@blogger.com