tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post2445454854602286196..comments2023-04-15T16:07:55.981+00:00Comments on Shapeshifting Green: ColdCrafty Green Poethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-37328779704795791662008-07-16T05:23:00.000+00:002008-07-16T05:23:00.000+00:00I like this poem a lot, especially the 3rd stanza....I like this poem a lot, especially the 3rd stanza.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-38283978696368857102008-06-12T09:12:00.000+00:002008-06-12T09:12:00.000+00:00tundra is well chosen.tundra is well chosen.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-43656416815962350902008-06-03T06:11:00.000+00:002008-06-03T06:11:00.000+00:00Sudden absence in his kiss --wow!this opening line...Sudden absence in his kiss --wow!<BR/>this opening line is absolutely stunning.<BR/><BR/>I love this poem!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-11131146375891089462008-06-02T19:04:00.000+00:002008-06-02T19:04:00.000+00:00I love this poem, too. The first stanza just knock...I love this poem, too. The first stanza just knocked me over.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-52063757720477037752008-06-01T15:01:00.000+00:002008-06-01T15:01:00.000+00:00The scene that the word 'tundra' elicits, and the ...The scene that the word 'tundra' elicits, and the use of such word in the scene in the second stanza -- now that's functionality in poetry. Apt and effective. ;) Cheers.S.L. Corsuahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10299376651709536034noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-39707136542236525652008-05-31T16:19:00.000+00:002008-05-31T16:19:00.000+00:00How beautiful. I know of this feeling - this poem...How beautiful. I know of this feeling - this poem brought back a temporary flood of those emotions. Awakening to realize your love is not there - last night's argument was not a dream; the sadness of loosing a loved one is real; There is an emptiness in those feelings - but with time all voids are filled. Thanks for sharing. Peace, Light and Love, Cordieb.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-72866612432174353062008-05-31T13:20:00.000+00:002008-05-31T13:20:00.000+00:00I shiver.This "Cold" means so much!Best wishes,Ang...I shiver.<BR/><BR/>This "Cold" means so much!<BR/><BR/>Best wishes,<BR/>Angelikahaiku-shelf (Angelika Wienert)https://www.blogger.com/profile/01004167617562345120noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-3984669401181987602008-05-31T05:23:00.000+00:002008-05-31T05:23:00.000+00:00Oh that is very cool, icy. Very precise and contro...Oh that is very cool, icy. Very precise and controlled too.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-76597524750697990412008-05-30T11:27:00.000+00:002008-05-30T11:27:00.000+00:00yes the third stanza is great---good sad poem--wor...yes the third stanza is great---good sad poem--worthy of another readScothttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09719725764131827872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-51774400035235006362008-05-29T22:25:00.000+00:002008-05-29T22:25:00.000+00:00Absolutely adored the 2nd stanza!"The king size be...Absolutely adored the 2nd stanza!<BR/><BR/>"The king size bed stretches<BR/>under rumpled white sheets<BR/>like tundra."<BR/><BR/>Great imagery. Kudos.∆https://www.blogger.com/profile/05251721181430121061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-70579349496381485952008-05-29T21:02:00.000+00:002008-05-29T21:02:00.000+00:00great desolate images that create a mood perfectly...great desolate images that create a mood perfectly... ouch!polonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12631341810150848122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-21417403037754862272008-05-29T16:14:00.000+00:002008-05-29T16:14:00.000+00:00i like the dark, fairy tale feel.i like the dark, fairy tale feel.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-79447658949078723652008-05-29T15:16:00.000+00:002008-05-29T15:16:00.000+00:00Tundra explain it all...driftingTundra explain it all...<BR/><BR/><A HREF="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2008/05/drfting.html" REL="nofollow">drifting</A>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-71999157210986688202008-05-29T15:00:00.000+00:002008-05-29T15:00:00.000+00:00Tragic is so often so beautiful - and in a way, ha...Tragic is so often so beautiful - and in a way, haunting.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-62234065382237565322008-05-29T14:54:00.000+00:002008-05-29T14:54:00.000+00:00rumpled white sheetslike tundra.i loved this.. i f...rumpled white sheets<BR/>like tundra.<BR/><BR/>i loved this.. i felt the division of ice between two lovers,, when there is a rift of argument between them in bed... excellent!!paisleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-63595245611439216622008-05-29T14:42:00.000+00:002008-05-29T14:42:00.000+00:00you put it so well, the absence, the lost, especia...you put it so well, the absence, the lost, especially the first partAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-56555572470502687312008-05-29T10:02:00.000+00:002008-05-29T10:02:00.000+00:00Strange how cold things seem when you just know so...Strange how cold things seem when you just know something is not right.Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-12805851264970242652008-05-29T09:21:00.000+00:002008-05-29T09:21:00.000+00:00I love this poem. It is so sad but very beautiful....I love this poem. It is so sad but very beautiful. Though I liked every stanza, I especially love the first one.Jane Doehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11087464056692451751noreply@blogger.com