tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post5439778794752529166..comments2023-04-15T16:07:55.981+00:00Comments on Shapeshifting Green: Gypsy DancehallCrafty Green Poethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-53834951891165619052008-03-21T16:02:00.000+00:002008-03-21T16:02:00.000+00:00love the way it danced to the perfect end.love the way it danced to the perfect end.Scothttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09719725764131827872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-13207099791970686942008-03-15T02:41:00.000+00:002008-03-15T02:41:00.000+00:00Cool, wild dream poem, the rhythm captures the swi...Cool, wild dream poem, the rhythm captures the swirl of dresses and movement of hips, wild and cool,Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-15228409031755980462008-03-13T09:43:00.000+00:002008-03-13T09:43:00.000+00:00Lively action and passion in the first stanza; the...Lively action and passion in the first stanza; the movement in the scene and the portrayal thereof is downright impressive. (And Billy's perceptive comment above sums it up well.) Cheers! ;)S.L. Corsuahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10299376651709536034noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-86701747134817108622008-03-12T13:57:00.000+00:002008-03-12T13:57:00.000+00:00A date with the night sounds very attractive!A date with the night sounds very attractive!Gilsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14764043301335852527noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-62405368008400675522008-03-11T21:41:00.000+00:002008-03-11T21:41:00.000+00:00This reminded me of a scene in the movie "Frieda."...This reminded me of a scene in the movie "Frieda." Well done and fun!Tammy Brierlyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14673290512175050093noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-86113392435167997782008-03-11T14:42:00.000+00:002008-03-11T14:42:00.000+00:00The movement in this is intoxicating, like being i...The movement in this is intoxicating, like being in the middle of the gypsy dance. And the end just stops it cold. Very nice.chicklegirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03000215636803243874noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-46819188983334098042008-03-11T01:31:00.000+00:002008-03-11T01:31:00.000+00:00Love the passion here!Love the passion here!Jessicahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09701158085304753313noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-48356574056637103732008-03-11T00:51:00.000+00:002008-03-11T00:51:00.000+00:00i will have to go from here directly to check out ...i will have to go from here directly to check out the links.. but i am so inspired by the raw passion of the actions in this poem... truly a dream to be remembered.....paisleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-51052638547603819082008-03-10T20:03:00.000+00:002008-03-10T20:03:00.000+00:00Just the perfect words to portray that abandonment...Just the perfect words to portray that abandonment!Linda Jacobshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14459940700516084069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-47209406481049907652008-03-10T17:50:00.000+00:002008-03-10T17:50:00.000+00:00Crazy crazy crazy, I sure hope you know how to dan...Crazy crazy crazy, I sure hope you know how to dance. Great use of the prompt.<BR/><BR/><BR/>love-Melanie-bdCassiopeia Riseshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02625091389788114012noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-87651350275158329312008-03-10T16:15:00.000+00:002008-03-10T16:15:00.000+00:00Gorgeous, sumptuous writing. how creative to start...Gorgeous, sumptuous writing. how creative to start with plates crashing and smashing to the floor. Signora must know some crazy tricks. <BR/>Love the mischievous, playful tone.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-13356269084017959402008-03-10T07:27:00.000+00:002008-03-10T07:27:00.000+00:00I love that poem! I love the rythm it has and the ...I love that poem! I love the rythm it has and the balance of fact/ imagination you've given it.. I always envy that in any poet!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-11454243048865536882008-03-10T01:37:00.000+00:002008-03-10T01:37:00.000+00:00oh my goodness, i so love this one!!! you know i'...oh my goodness, i so love this one!!! you know i'm a gypsy wannabe. *wink*<BR/><BR/>and now that i thought about it, this reminds me of lorca's poem about a gypsy. very vivid.<BR/><BR/>thank you for this! :)Odessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17397968854709642789noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17370683.post-21745778491754335982008-03-09T18:02:00.000+00:002008-03-09T18:02:00.000+00:00The wild, delicious frenzy and movement of the fir...The wild, delicious frenzy and movement of the first two stanzas--a bacchanal, a blur--is balanced so nicely by the "back in Kansas" reality ending. This is most enjoyable.WHhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14815646433314236886noreply@blogger.com