poetry, photos and reviews from Crafty Green Poet
An intriguing and carefully crafted character study. Opens out in the last line like an echo.
lovelyi will show this to my goth daughter (13) she'll love it.and want to be her!
ah the terror of beauty...or, what would a boisterous boy do if he had a clue..? or what would a muse do if she had a voice without a boy...? or....Poetman
PaulS - thanks! Lettuce - hope your daughter enjoys!+Poetman - intriguing speculations!
Love the ending!
This is terrific. She's a sweet character I could see showing up in many different poetic scenarios.
I would love to collect the hand-out. Be my muse, more than welcome, I loved the way you used short lines... thank you.UL
I see an alluring young woman, whose thoughts would both shock and captivate......rob
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