Monday, July 17, 2006

Urban haiku

Over on One Deep Breath, this weeks prompt is to write an urban haiku. This one has been writing itself all day:

dancing at goth club
make up and glamorous clothes
somewhere to belong

6 comments:

Tammy said...

"somewhere to belong" was powerful and what we all need. Fabulous job!

Sandy said...

Love the image you created. And, understand the feeling.

Jennifer said...

makes me think, well done

Jodi said...

Great haiku! Fits the theme so well!

bella said...

Great haiku. I'm glad you feel like you fit in somewhere. It's something not everyone feels.
Good for you.

susanlavonne said...

wow this haiku wakes up all the senses! super.