Monday, December 18, 2006

haiku - storms

Thunder crashes -
downstairs the sound of neighbours
fighting



Storms for One Deep Breath

14 comments:

Roswila said...

Yes, I like this a lot. Though I must say I'd rather a thunderstorm any day, than that other storm downstairs.:-)

Mike Mc said...

A storm to avoid, nicely done.

Mike Mc said...

A storm to avoid, nicely done.

Mike Mc said...

Time to head for the storm cellar, nicely done.

michelle said...

I like the sense of mystery here.

Mike Mc said...

Sorry about the duplicates, blogger is misbehaving.

Tammy said...

Loved this very creative haiku!

G said...

This one hits home, having both heard neighbors fighting and been part of the fighting, myself! (Irish + Greek = Volatile) Very creative, can hear the thunder, almost as a warning. Thanks.

paris parfait said...

I once had neighbours like that - very terrifying! I prefer the thunderstorm.

Sandy said...

The most disturbing kind of storm. I prefer the natural elements. Good poem.

cloudscome said...

Nice sound imagery, sharp tension = powerful haiku!

getzapped said...

Very real! Well done.

Jodi said...

Storm of the heart.

Crafty Green Poet said...

Thanks for all your comments everyone! Hope your holidays are all entirely free of this type of storm!