Monday, December 18, 2006

haiku - storms

Thunder crashes -
downstairs the sound of neighbours
fighting



Storms for One Deep Breath

14 comments:

Roswila said...

Yes, I like this a lot. Though I must say I'd rather a thunderstorm any day, than that other storm downstairs.:-)

Anonymous said...

A storm to avoid, nicely done.

Anonymous said...

A storm to avoid, nicely done.

Anonymous said...

Time to head for the storm cellar, nicely done.

michelle said...

I like the sense of mystery here.

Anonymous said...

Sorry about the duplicates, blogger is misbehaving.

Tammy Brierly said...

Loved this very creative haiku!

angie said...

This one hits home, having both heard neighbors fighting and been part of the fighting, myself! (Irish + Greek = Volatile) Very creative, can hear the thunder, almost as a warning. Thanks.

paris parfait said...

I once had neighbours like that - very terrifying! I prefer the thunderstorm.

Anonymous said...

The most disturbing kind of storm. I prefer the natural elements. Good poem.

Andromeda Jazmon said...

Nice sound imagery, sharp tension = powerful haiku!

get zapped said...

Very real! Well done.

Anonymous said...

Storm of the heart.

Crafty Green Poet said...

Thanks for all your comments everyone! Hope your holidays are all entirely free of this type of storm!