CGP, Like this one a lot. Vivid contrasts and strong tension/anticipation.
P.S. If you feel comfortable listing my link in your "art link" place on one of your blogs and your "poetry" links place, I'd appreciate it. I like being listed here, but it seems like a hole to be left out on the other blogs. If you'd rather not, no problem. Your organization on your blogs are your choice.
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I guess that's why my poem made you smile. :)
Bright like passion... great line.
Trembling in passion? Desire? Fear?
Rose
xo
Brian - yes you're right and Rose - you can choose - it would work with any of those!
fantastic ... i can picture the cold white room, you like a flame ... lovely
earrings trembling...I can just see that!
HOT! It sets a scene like a novel would.
Very nice! Red is a very passionate color.
Such a romantic poem, sums up perfectly that first date excitement. Made me smile, too.
Juliet,
I love this! i like it more than your spring one. This is just soooo..... (Ifeel the feeling, but am lost for the words!)
rel
Nice contrasts in this poem, hot/cold and strength/weakness.
WOW! So few words that are incredibly full of anticipation and image.
"your earrings trembling" - aaah! I remember a night or two like this. Vivid image you have created.
OOOH... alter ego has it going on this week. I love the red image against the "cold white room".
Love the tension in this.
CGP,
Like this one a lot.
Vivid contrasts and strong tension/anticipation.
P.S. If you feel comfortable listing my link in your "art link" place on one of your blogs and your "poetry" links place, I'd appreciate it. I like being listed here, but it seems like a hole to be left out on the other blogs. If you'd rather not, no problem. Your organization on your blogs are your choice.
This poem makes me "feel" red. Very nice!
I love the "earrings trembling"
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