Monday, July 30, 2007

haiku - compare and contrast

the trombonist
plays her first solo -
dogs howl outside.


Compare and Contrast for One Deep Breath.
I've posted another compare and contrast haiku on Crafty Green Poet here.

13 comments:

Brian said...

This one makes me laugh. Thanks. :)

odessa said...

love the image of howling dogs!

polona said...

oh, great!
made me laugh :)

tumblewords said...

What a kick! Love it!

Roswila said...

Really enjoyed this one! (I play the didjeridu and dogs love the sound, but cats hate it.)

Rae Trigg said...

I very much liked this one. Wonderful image!

Clare said...

I can totally hear the symphony that this creates -- being a dog lover and a music lover, this would be heaven!
:)

Remiman said...

Juliet,

Perfect! I've lived that one, only it was our daughter's clarinet and the neighbors hound. not a pleasant duo. ;-)
rel

Fledgling Poet said...

This one truly brought a smile to my face. :~)

Crafty Green Poet said...

Glad this one made you all smile! Didgeridoo, Roswila, wow!

R's Musings said...

Oh, this is hilarious! My cat runs when my daughter plays violin, too. :)

Plain Foolish said...

*grin* I'm learning banjo. Folks are far more tolerant of a fledgeling banjo player than my earlier instrument in untrained hands: the flute.

gel said...

great comparison between trombonist and dogs howling!
I smiled
Nice job, J.