Sunday, December 30, 2007

senryu - frost

make-up glitters
like frost on her face -
nightclub Ice Queen.


for a different perspective on the theme, read my tanka on Crafty Green Poet.

frost for One Deep Breath.

9 comments:

gingatao said...

Cool. The two poems, this one and the one in the other bloggedy blog capture the different perspectives of the Juliet Wilson in the two thingies on one subject most perfectly, cool bananas.

Crafty Green Poet said...

LOL, you captured it exactly there gingatao!

Roswila said...

Very nice haiku!

the laughing gypsy said...

nicely done! so many levels of interpretation.... A Laughing Gypsy

tumblewords said...

Like the image in this - I can see her - matter of fact, I may know her!

spacedlaw said...

Cold light on her face,
Mirrors that do not reflect,
Mask for all to see.

Happy New Year!

qualcosa di bello said...

a brilliant & unexpected twist on the theme!

Krissie said...

Juliet - that was me in your haiku..about 35 years ago lol...yes queen of the disco was me! like the haiku!

daisies said...

:) love this one ...