poetry, photos and reviews from Crafty Green Poet
Oh that is cool, cold and slicing. Beauty in the language like a stroke with a Zen sword.
gosh, how true!excellent
hi Juliet, i like this lots and lots!!! wise, true words too! thnaks for your comments over at mine, i think that seeing a whole estate turned to rubble must be even more demoralising than one factory,eek! it's a shame, the strange things man does...
Its true, CGP. But, i feel its very subjective...wishes, devika
Devika - isn't most poetry subjective?
I agree CGP..in fact i write about me and my life...But here, the generalisation with the use of 'we' made me doubt...hope my comment didn't annoy you...it's in me to write what i feel openly..its a spur of the moment reaction...nothing too deep in it :)wishes, devika
Hi Devika - no your comment didn't annoy me, thans for your second more specific comment, that was helpful
Hi CGP!thank you for the kind words :)wishes, devika
Good one !!
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