Sunday, April 13, 2014

senryu from a nightclub

hurting my feet
as soon as I sit down -
new dancing shoes


the man in a dress
dances in stiletto heels
better than I could


on the dancefloor -
a couple make not speaking
into an art form

strobe lights
in the underground nightclub -
my nettle stung arm


for NaPoWriMo


rel said...

I like it!
Now I have to go look up senryu

Crafty Green Poet said...

Thanks rel, senryu are like haiku but centred on human activities rather than nature,