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Your haiku suggests so many different meanings - of sadness; mourning and yes, solitude and isolation. Very well done!
this is so good too. I love the stark contrasts.
Beautiful. I love this, evocative and unexpected.
So much unstated, and unstated so well. I like it.
There's a great contrast there, the black on white, the sudden appearance of the woman in nature, and more. I like the image that it conjures for me and I can almost feel snow starting to fall outside my window even though it's only September.
The beauty of impermanance is here. Excellent job!
gothic. i can imagine the tolling of a single bell. wonderful haiku.
wow! does this create a mood!
Definitely a sharp contrast to your other haiku, setting a tone of desolation in the solitude. Well done!
I like the contrast of black and white, as well the coldness running through - of iron, of snow, of mourning.
Starkly alone -
This is what haiku is supposed to do...create a snapshot, catch a moment just like that. Love it!
Thanks for all your comments everyone!
If words can evoke color than yours have truly evoked an image of black and white.
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Your haiku suggests so many different meanings - of sadness; mourning and yes, solitude and isolation. Very well done!
this is so good too. I love the stark contrasts.
Beautiful. I love this, evocative and unexpected.
So much unstated, and unstated so well. I like it.
There's a great contrast there, the black on white, the sudden appearance of the woman in nature, and more. I like the image that it conjures for me and I can almost feel snow starting to fall outside my window even though it's only September.
The beauty of impermanance is here. Excellent job!
gothic. i can imagine the tolling of a single bell. wonderful haiku.
wow! does this create a mood!
Definitely a sharp contrast to your other haiku, setting a tone of desolation in the solitude. Well done!
I like the contrast of black and white, as well the coldness running through - of iron, of snow, of mourning.
Starkly alone -
This is what haiku is supposed to do...create a snapshot, catch a moment just like that. Love it!
Thanks for all your comments everyone!
If words can evoke color than yours have truly evoked an image of black and white.
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