Monday, September 25, 2006

Haiku - windows and doorways

On One Deep Breath this week we are asked to write haiku about windows or doorways:

your blue eyes
full of gentleness and love -
windows on your soul.

7 comments:

paris parfait said...

Beautiful take on the prompt!

Becca said...

Oh, this is just lovely! What a clever viewpoint for the prompt.

Anonymous said...

Yes they are, the best windows of all.

Tammy Brierly said...

I loved your creative take on this one. Eyes are beautiful windows :)

Catherine said...

I see I get to visit you twice on different blogs! This is lovely.

Anonymous said...

very beautiful haiku!

Annie Z said...

oh yes. This is great! I hadn't even considered eyes for this prompt. It is so perfect. And so enchanting.
JTL
xxx