Tuesday, March 27, 2007

One line haiku

the space between us on the dance-floor
*************************************

midnight waking to an Italian aria
*************************************
one line haiku for One Deep Breath

12 comments:

Brian said...

Romantic and sensual. I like. :)

BlueJude said...

Ver sensual. I love it! You are one talented lady!

Regina Clare Jane said...

Hm... my mind is thinking romance right now...

Ron said...

Romantic indeed. Did you mean to write waking? At first read I thought I saw 'midnight walking'....
Either way might work. I must read too fast. Need to pay attention.

Rose Dewy Knickers said...

I see a couple in love. :)

Rose

xo

Marcia said...

The "space between us on the dance floor" I love that when it is read alone without the one following it, it can go either way, romantic and close, or distant and cold. Together I read only love.

Gerald England said...

these are a couple of good 'uns too

the first has subtle tension

and the second plays a tune

Liza Lee Miller said...

Very nice, Juliet! Really like the first one.

jem said...

The first one is great. I love attention drawn to the things that arent there!

Nancy Bea said...

Very evocative, both.

michelle said...

that first one gave me goose bumps!

Ä‘poetic1© said...

Lovely...