Tuesday, March 27, 2007

One line haiku

the space between us on the dance-floor
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midnight waking to an Italian aria
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one line haiku for One Deep Breath

12 comments:

Anonymous said...

Romantic and sensual. I like. :)

PennyBlue said...

Ver sensual. I love it! You are one talented lady!

Regina said...

Hm... my mind is thinking romance right now...

Anonymous said...

Romantic indeed. Did you mean to write waking? At first read I thought I saw 'midnight walking'....
Either way might work. I must read too fast. Need to pay attention.

Anonymous said...

I see a couple in love. :)

Rose

xo

Marcia (MeeAugraphie) said...

The "space between us on the dance floor" I love that when it is read alone without the one following it, it can go either way, romantic and close, or distant and cold. Together I read only love.

Gerald (SK14) said...

these are a couple of good 'uns too

the first has subtle tension

and the second plays a tune

Unknown said...

Very nice, Juliet! Really like the first one.

jem said...

The first one is great. I love attention drawn to the things that arent there!

Nancy Bea Miller said...

Very evocative, both.

Anonymous said...

that first one gave me goose bumps!

đpoetic1© said...

Lovely...