Monday, August 20, 2007

haiku - daybreak

my alarm clock
shatters quiet sleep -
day breaks.


For a quieter daybreak, please visit Crafty Green Poet.


Daybreak for One Deep Breath


PS - Haiku Scotland recently accepted five of my haiku to appear in their September and December 2007 issues.

11 comments:

Clare said...

I like your use of "shatters" and "breaks" together -- that is how my alarm feels to me too. And congratulations on the Haiku Scotland acceptances -- this is awesome news!!
:)

Becca said...

A rude awakening, but a great haiku!

daisies said...

congratulations!! so well deserved ~ i adore your haiku :)

Bill said...

Juliet, you have my sympathy, but let me tell you

3 am
the bright face
of the alarm clock

Nice work.

tumblewords said...

oh, yes, not all mornings are sweetness and light -- nice!

Fledgling Poet said...

That alarm is jarring...they need to come up with something better to wake us up! Great haiku. :~)

megan said...

alarm shatters quiet...crystal clear work, again!

Rae Trigg said...

Oh, now there's an image I can sympathize with - alarm clocks shattering the morning quiet. Very nice work.

the heartful blogger said...

Perfect!!!

Patois said...

I so like that "day breaks." You've made it fit so perfectly. I feel it some days. I do.

harmonyinline said...

Congratulations on your Haiku acceptance for publication