shatters quiet sleep -
day breaks.
For a quieter daybreak, please visit Crafty Green Poet.
Daybreak for One Deep Breath
PS - Haiku Scotland recently accepted five of my haiku to appear in their September and December 2007 issues.
For a quieter daybreak, please visit Crafty Green Poet.
11 comments:
I like your use of "shatters" and "breaks" together -- that is how my alarm feels to me too. And congratulations on the Haiku Scotland acceptances -- this is awesome news!!
:)
A rude awakening, but a great haiku!
congratulations!! so well deserved ~ i adore your haiku :)
Juliet, you have my sympathy, but let me tell you
3 am
the bright face
of the alarm clock
Nice work.
oh, yes, not all mornings are sweetness and light -- nice!
That alarm is jarring...they need to come up with something better to wake us up! Great haiku. :~)
alarm shatters quiet...crystal clear work, again!
Oh, now there's an image I can sympathize with - alarm clocks shattering the morning quiet. Very nice work.
Perfect!!!
I so like that "day breaks." You've made it fit so perfectly. I feel it some days. I do.
Congratulations on your Haiku acceptance for publication
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