Monday, January 28, 2008

senryu

on the dance-floor -
you make not speaking to me
into an art form.


Desire for Writers Island

18 comments:

polona said...

oh well done!

daisies said...

*love

Sandy said...

It seems I have experienced this myself...one time. ;) Excellent senryu.

S

jo said...

lovely.....

Constance said...

Wonderful! So much emotion packed into that little space. :)

Rambler said...

an art form.. wonderdful

Marja said...

beautifullly capturing the desires in dans

watermaid said...

I just love it.

gautami tripathy said...

Art form..what an image!

Housing my soul

totomai said...

straight to the point kind of piece. i liked its brevity.

anthonynorth said...

I never realised silence could be so poetic.

Rwells said...

lol with a twinge of discomfort. nice one.

LittleWing said...

oh, yes absolutely... speechless...

tumblewords said...

Amazing! A lifetime packed into three lines...amazing!

giggles said...

Impressive, powerful and visual!! Well done!

chicklegirl said...

Brilliantly simple.

rch said...

Hi crafty, short and sweet and bringing back some memories.

Scot said...

well done