Shapeshifting Green: senryu

Monday, January 28, 2008

on the dance-floor -
you make not speaking to me
into an art form.

Desire for Writers Island

polona said...: oh well done!; 5:17 pm
daisies said...: *love; 9:11 pm
Sandy said...: It seems I have experienced this myself...one time. ;) Excellent senryu.

S; 9:32 pm
Anonymous said...: lovely.....; 9:59 pm
Constance Brewer said...: Wonderful! So much emotion packed into that little space. :); 6:01 am
Rambler said...: an art form.. wonderdful; 6:15 am
Marja said...: beautifullly capturing the desires in dans; 6:25 am
Anonymous said...: I just love it.; 10:32 am
Anonymous said...: Art form..what an image!

Housing my soul; 12:43 pm
totomai said...: straight to the point kind of piece. i liked its brevity.; 1:00 pm
anthonynorth said...: I never realised silence could be so poetic.; 3:58 pm
Anonymous said...: lol with a twinge of discomfort. nice one.; 6:23 pm
little wing writer said...: oh, yes absolutely... speechless...; 6:28 pm
Tumblewords: said...: Amazing! A lifetime packed into three lines...amazing!; 6:51 pm
Giggles said...: Impressive, powerful and visual!! Well done!; 2:25 pm
chicklegirl said...: Brilliantly simple.; 10:30 pm
rch said...: Hi crafty, short and sweet and bringing back some memories.; 1:23 am
Scot said...: well done; 4:05 pm