Sunday, March 02, 2008

Change

red traffic light -
I rattle the coins
in my pocket


change for One Single Impression

23 comments:

paisley said...

aha... very clever kind of a change "two-fer"... very nice......

Sian said...

Very neat, I liked this. :)

Jone said...

I am smiling at this. Thanks.

Billy said...

Captures waiting perfectly!

Ackworth Born said...

nice
I had a similar sentiment but no traffic lights.

polona said...

very clever
and just right

qualcosa di bello said...

what a clever double play on change!

tumblewords said...

Love the 'change' in this one -

Roswila said...

LOL! Love the play on the word change. The haiku raises for me my own impatience as I can't get everything done at once in my new home.

Andrée said...

I'm laughing! It's fun, clever. I'm going to try writing fun next time. It'll be hard, since I'm not fun!
My change is here. Thank you.

noahthegreat said...

Clever and true.

liquidquick said...

man stands with hand out
i'm not feeling kind today
light turns green, i go.

STP said...

Simple and a unique take on the challenge. I like it.

reprehriestless warillever said...

Your haiku captures the essence of waiting. And incredibly witty.

Marcia (MeeAugraphie) said...

That use of change never crossed my mind. Made me think of how the world can go by when we are waiting and not being involved.

Marilyn said...

Oh this is fun.

gardenpath said...

Lights change, pocket change! I like this one very much.

Patois said...

You've hit on both types of change in my life. Smile-provoking. Thanks

the teach said...

Great take on "change," Crafty Green Poet! Love it! :D

Yolanda said...

I really liked this one and the whimsy it produces.

Jane Poe (aka Deborah) said...

excellent take on the prompt ... JP/deb

storyteller said...

Cleverly conceived and executed!
Hugs and blessings,

Paul said...

that red light
makes me
wanna get going.