poetry, photos and reviews from Crafty Green Poet
aha... very clever kind of a change "two-fer"... very nice......
Very neat, I liked this. :)
I am smiling at this. Thanks.
Captures waiting perfectly!
niceI had a similar sentiment but no traffic lights.
very cleverand just right
what a clever double play on change!
Love the 'change' in this one -
LOL! Love the play on the word change. The haiku raises for me my own impatience as I can't get everything done at once in my new home.
I'm laughing! It's fun, clever. I'm going to try writing fun next time. It'll be hard, since I'm not fun! My change is here. Thank you.
Clever and true.
man stands with hand outi'm not feeling kind todaylight turns green, i go.
Simple and a unique take on the challenge. I like it.
Your haiku captures the essence of waiting. And incredibly witty.
That use of change never crossed my mind. Made me think of how the world can go by when we are waiting and not being involved.
Oh this is fun.
Lights change, pocket change! I like this one very much.
You've hit on both types of change in my life. Smile-provoking. Thanks
Great take on "change," Crafty Green Poet! Love it! :D
I really liked this one and the whimsy it produces.
excellent take on the prompt ... JP/deb
Cleverly conceived and executed!Hugs and blessings,
that red lightmakes me wanna get going.
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aha... very clever kind of a change "two-fer"... very nice......
Very neat, I liked this. :)
I am smiling at this. Thanks.
Captures waiting perfectly!
nice
I had a similar sentiment but no traffic lights.
very clever
and just right
what a clever double play on change!
Love the 'change' in this one -
LOL! Love the play on the word change. The haiku raises for me my own impatience as I can't get everything done at once in my new home.
I'm laughing! It's fun, clever. I'm going to try writing fun next time. It'll be hard, since I'm not fun!
My change is here. Thank you.
Clever and true.
man stands with hand out
i'm not feeling kind today
light turns green, i go.
Simple and a unique take on the challenge. I like it.
Your haiku captures the essence of waiting. And incredibly witty.
That use of change never crossed my mind. Made me think of how the world can go by when we are waiting and not being involved.
Oh this is fun.
Lights change, pocket change! I like this one very much.
You've hit on both types of change in my life. Smile-provoking. Thanks
Great take on "change," Crafty Green Poet! Love it! :D
I really liked this one and the whimsy it produces.
excellent take on the prompt ... JP/deb
Cleverly conceived and executed!
Hugs and blessings,
that red light
makes me
wanna get going.
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