hurting my feet
as soon as I sit down -
new dancing shoes
***
the man in a dress
dances in stiletto heels
better than I could
***
on the dancefloor -
a couple make not speaking
into an art form
***
strobe lights
in the underground nightclub -
my nettle stung arm
***
for NaPoWriMo
as soon as I sit down -
new dancing shoes
***
the man in a dress
dances in stiletto heels
better than I could
***
on the dancefloor -
a couple make not speaking
into an art form
***
strobe lights
in the underground nightclub -
my nettle stung arm
***
for NaPoWriMo
2 comments:
I like it!
Now I have to go look up senryu
Thanks rel, senryu are like haiku but centred on human activities rather than nature,
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