Romantic indeed. Did you mean to write waking? At first read I thought I saw 'midnight walking'.... Either way might work. I must read too fast. Need to pay attention.
The "space between us on the dance floor" I love that when it is read alone without the one following it, it can go either way, romantic and close, or distant and cold. Together I read only love.
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Romantic and sensual. I like. :)
Ver sensual. I love it! You are one talented lady!
Hm... my mind is thinking romance right now...
Romantic indeed. Did you mean to write waking? At first read I thought I saw 'midnight walking'....
Either way might work. I must read too fast. Need to pay attention.
I see a couple in love. :)
Rose
xo
The "space between us on the dance floor" I love that when it is read alone without the one following it, it can go either way, romantic and close, or distant and cold. Together I read only love.
these are a couple of good 'uns too
the first has subtle tension
and the second plays a tune
Very nice, Juliet! Really like the first one.
The first one is great. I love attention drawn to the things that arent there!
Very evocative, both.
that first one gave me goose bumps!
Lovely...
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